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Post by Direwulven on Jul 31, 2013 12:20:52 GMT
Trolls should be banned from this thread so Bobby can see all the requests for cards. Go increase your post count somewhere else! /Finger lingers over mod button......
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2013 12:22:11 GMT
Trolls should be banned from this thread so Bobby can see all the requests for cards. Go increase your post count somewhere else! /Finger lingers over mod button...... *Asks for mercy T.T*
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Direwulven
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Post by Direwulven on Jul 31, 2013 12:23:52 GMT
/Finger lingers over mod button...... *Asks for mercy T.T* /Presses edit button to correct grammar. Why are you asking for mercy amigo?
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Post by Bobbypim on Jul 31, 2013 12:24:47 GMT
4 more cards are now added for public view! Great job! My thoughts: - Savage's RL picture looks more fearsome - Unruler is OP - Sailas - love the art. Amber loves him too. - Samche needs to be unique. - Sorry, couldn't find any undead wolves flipping the bird - Of course Unruler is OP. He's the father of fire snakes - Sailas and Amber are the new bradelina - Thought I already made Samche unique... Uploaded a new version
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Post by Direwulven on Jul 31, 2013 12:27:39 GMT
Great job! My thoughts: - Savage's RL picture looks more fearsome - Unruler is OP - Sailas - love the art. Amber loves him too. - Samche needs to be unique. - Sorry, couldn't find any undead wolves flipping the bird - Of course Unruler is OP. He's the father of fire snakes - Sailas and Amber are the new bradelina - Thought I already made Samche unique... Uploaded a new version Hide Samche behind a Yari and that's gg.
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Post by Conquestadore on Jul 31, 2013 12:29:43 GMT
- Sorry, couldn't find any undead wolves flipping the bird - Of course Unruler is OP. He's the father of fire snakes - Sailas and Amber are the new bradelina - Thought I already made Samche unique... Uploaded a new version Hide Samche behind a Yari and that's gg. Samche is a priest ally!
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Post by Direwulven on Jul 31, 2013 12:31:49 GMT
Hide Samche behind a Yari and that's gg. Samche is a priest ally! Oh, a Shadow Priest ally?
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Post by Sailas on Jul 31, 2013 13:12:37 GMT
Looking great guys Assuming shadow priest would have access to plague that is some serious resource denial!
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Post by Conquestadore on Jul 31, 2013 13:20:05 GMT
Looking great guys Assuming shadow priest would have access to plague that is some serious resource denial! Here be monsters, Plague, Samche ..
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Post by The Stalker on Jul 31, 2013 14:22:48 GMT
Some grammar edits etc.
Ocnarb: Correct spelling: cant' should be can't
Holy Punisher: Spelling error: addtional should be additional. Grammar correction: card current reads: and loses one durability while Holy Punisher is in play - should read: and loses one extra durability while Holy Punisher is in play - note: that would mean on attack or defence, if you want the durability to be only one of those, you will need to specify
Whoissavage: as it reads right now it seems that as soon as Savage is killed another one replaces it on the board. That seems OP??? Did you mean draw one savage into your hand?
Sailas: Grammar cleanup: It's not wrong, but would read better written like this: "your hero's weapons lose", not "the weapons of your hero loses." It's got to do with the use of passive voice, which is not ideal
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Post by Master_Savage on Jul 31, 2013 14:36:27 GMT
My guy is suppose to replace himself on the board.
Could be changed to.
" (0) Remove this card in your graveyard graveyard from play. Summon 1 whoisSAVAGE from your deck at the end of your turn."
Or keep the same effect and lower his health by 1.
3/4
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Post by Pandevmonium on Jul 31, 2013 14:40:05 GMT
Savage's art is awesome
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Post by Raphael Majere on Jul 31, 2013 14:49:44 GMT
Sailas art is cool but I still see magneto with wings.
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Post by Bobbypim on Jul 31, 2013 14:51:43 GMT
Some grammar edits etc. Ocnarb: Correct spelling: cant' should be can't Holy Punisher: Spelling error: addtional should be additional. Grammar correction: card current reads: and loses one durability while Holy Punisher is in play - should read: and loses one extra durability while Holy Punisher is in play - note: that would mean on attack or defence, if you want the durability to be only one of those, you will need to specify Whoissavage: as it reads right now it seems that as soon as Savage is killed another one replaces it on the board. That seems OP??? Did you mean draw one savage into your hand? Sailas: Grammar cleanup: It's not wrong, but would read better written like this: "your hero's weapons lose", not "the weapons of your hero loses." It's got to do with the use of passive voice, which is not ideal Thanks man... Grammar corrected And st4lker pls take a look at Holy Punisher and see if the meaning is more understandable. whoisSAVAGE have been edited as well. Is now 3/4 instead of 3/5.
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Direwulven
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Post by Direwulven on Jul 31, 2013 15:00:08 GMT
Lorgi the Deluded seems fun to play.
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Post by Unruler on Jul 31, 2013 15:10:19 GMT
Tremble beneath my wrath, heretics!
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Post by Pandevmonium on Jul 31, 2013 15:13:19 GMT
BP expansion >> Dark Prophecies
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Post by Conquestadore on Jul 31, 2013 15:16:22 GMT
BP expansion >> Dark Prophecies +1
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Post by Unruler on Jul 31, 2013 15:33:09 GMT
I wonder what's ConqesTEAdor's card would be?
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Post by Bobbypim on Jul 31, 2013 15:51:51 GMT
Uploaded Lorgi and Senyong - and changed the image of my own card (couldn't have an image of a rival game on the greatest card of all ) I have a few drafts flying around in cyberspace waiting for approval! But I think I'm done with the posted requests for now. Please let me know if I've left someone out...
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